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Certain personal qualities cannot to achieved through university studies.do you agree or disagree

Certain personal qualities cannot to achieved through university studies. pReNL
Certain qualities play important role in everyone life. howere, it has become an issue of debat that these qualities to feasible with the help of university education. I am going to explain my views in my upcoming paragraph. To commence with, people can enhance the knowledge with the help of university studies. if a person will go to the University then they will meet with different types of people as well as they will talk with other person. university education always provide lots of information related to the world. in the University, there are provide difference types of book as well as magine then people will gain enhance knowledge
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howere
, it has become an issue of
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that these qualities to feasible with the
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education. I am going to
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explain
my views in my upcoming paragraph.

To commence with,
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people
can enhance the knowledge with the
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help
of
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university
studies.
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if
a person will go to the
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University
then they will
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meet
with
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different
types of
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people
as well
as they will talk with other person.
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university
education always provide lots of information related to the world.
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in
the
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University
, there are
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provide
difference types of book
as well
as
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magine
then
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people
will gain enhance
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knowledge

IELTS essay Certain personal qualities cannot to achieved through university studies.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
108 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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