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Nowadays in many countries, young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays in many countries, young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. Is it a positive or negative development? Jo3X0

Due to lack of opportunities in rural areas and proliferation of education, the number of adolescents shifting to cities from villages is increasing rapidly as urban areas have a lot to offer, be it adequate work at par with your experience or tertiary education in more popular universities. Younger generation, now a days, is very ambitious about their future. Living in a relatively small community in their native places hinders their growth prospects as it has been commonly noticed that both the education system and work environment lack skills, competency and

Due to lack of opportunities in rural areas and proliferation of education, the number of adolescents shifting to cities from villages is increasing rapidly
 as urban areas have a lot to offer, be it adequate work at par with your experience or tertiary education in more popular universities.

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 ambitious about their future. Living in a relatively
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 community in their native places hinders their growth prospects as it has been commonly
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