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Government need to pay for dyeing languages.Both vie and your opinion

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Modern world today many vernacular languages are in the verge of extinction due to few speakers. It is often argued that government investment would be essential for this issue. However, some consider it is not necessary to spend fund for dyeing language. In my opinion, I consider spending money on dyeing languages is unnecessary and this can be used for more pressing issues. On the one hand, supporters of near extinct languages say that it is part of our culture and heritage of any society when a language dies the h; therefore government has to contribute financially in prefer to save the before extinct enterly. The fund requires to establish, for example, more language study centre for new learnersand funding for doing research, and carry out more activities related this languages.

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today
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 vernacular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
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 are in the verge of extinction due Did you mean "too"?too
to
 few speakers. It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
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government
 investment would be essential for this issue. However
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some
 consider it is not necessary to spend fund for dyeing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
. In my opinion, I consider spending money on dyeing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
languages
 is unnecessary and this can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for more pressing issues.

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languages
 say that it is part of our culture and heritage of any society when a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :passes away
dies
 the h; therefore
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 contribute financially
 in prefer to save the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
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enterly
. The fund requires Did you mean "establishing"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.establishing
to establish
, for example
, more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 study Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 for new Possible spelling mistake found.learner sandlearners and
learnersand
 funding for doing research, and carry out more activities related Did you mean "these"?these
this
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languages
. 