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What is the current situation of yours and what is your hope.

What is the current situation of yours and what is your hope. QLKmw

My name is Tiago. I live in a destitute part of Toronto. I have to work long hours, so I am usually exhausted. My home has a superb view of the city, but my apartment as often freezing in the winter and scorching in the summer. I work hard, so one day I will be a wealthy man.

My name is Tiago. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in a destitute part of Toronto. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 work long hours, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I am usually
 exhausted. My home has a superb view of the city, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 my apartment as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 freezing in the winter and scorching in the summer. I work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 one day I will be a wealthy This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
. 

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IELTS essay What is the current situation of yours and what is your hope.

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

58 words

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5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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