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The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources in its young people. How true do you think of it? what is the best way to invest resources?

The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources in its young people. How true do you think of it? what is the best way to invest resources? lJPb
Youth plays a vital role in the development of the country. For the prosperity of the country, the government should invest in the development of youth. In the essay, we are going to put the light on some of the facts that reveal the role of youth in the development of the country also one of the methods to invent resources for the youth. it is undeniable fact that the future of a nation is dependent on its youth because youth is the next workforce of the country, since the youth are more innovative and powerful than other age groups it is crucial for the government to invest in the development of the youth and as we have witnessed it in the history of Pakistan that how the youth have struggled in the independence of the country. From my point of view, if the youth of the country is well educated they can bring up the revaluation So the country should properly invest the resources in the development of youth. In my opinion, the government should promote education among the youth. They should provide opportunities that increase their knowledge and skill. For instance, the government can start the free vocational program through which they can train the young to create value in every field whether it is business, science, or engineering the youth can bring the revolution. In a nutshell, it is evident from the history of Pakistan that youth performs a significant role in the development of the nation, and by properly providing them the resource the country could succeed.
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. For the prosperity of the
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should invest in the
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youth
. In the essay, we are going to put the light on
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one of the methods to invent resources for the youth.

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youth
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because
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is the
next
workforce of the
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country
, since the
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youth
are more innovative and powerful than other age groups it is crucial for the
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government
to invest in the
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development
of the
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youth
and as we have witnessed it in the history of Pakistan that how the
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youth
have struggled in the independence of the
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country
. From my point of view, if the
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youth
of the
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well educated
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the
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should
properly
invest the resources in the
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development
of youth.

In my opinion, the
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government
should promote education among the
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youth
. They should provide opportunities that increase their knowledge and
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the free vocational program through which they can train the young to create value in every field whether it is business, science, or engineering the
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youth
can bring the revolution.

In a nutshell, it is evident from the history of Pakistan that
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youth
performs a significant role in the
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development
of the nation, and by
properly
providing them the resource the
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country
could succeed.
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IELTS essay The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources in its young people. How true do you think of it? what is the best way to invest resources?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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