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Do you agree or dissagree with following statement? the best teacher is one who is very knowledge about subject matter.

the best teacher is one who is very knowledge about subject matter. EdLP3
A bunch of people believe that the best teacher who knowing about subject matter. However, it’s a well-known thing that criterias to be the best teacher are being easygoing with students, and giving praise to students by telling them you’re going right or you should focus and look carefully on a subject or any issue. To begin with, if someone wanna be the best teacher, he/she should be easygoing, and it is the most important criteria as they should get into touch with students calm and considerate. For instance, when I was in high school, I had a teacher, majored physic, and that teacher all was angry like a cat. That’s why, every student in my class don’t like him much because of his behavior. However, in the same class, I had a biology teacher and she was easygoing and also outgoing. Consequently, we, my class, all like that teacher, and we can ask her everything about our daily life. Secondly, teachers should help to the students that which point they are missing. If the teacher implement that on the students, I’m sure every student will understand what they learning at school. That’s why, students can carry out on exams easily. Furthermore, there is a research named OYEO. That research shows that ıf a teacher will pay attention on a student to show his/her missing points, the student’s success is increased by %80. That’s why, teachers ought to pay attention on their students. To sum up, when all thins are taken into consideration, the most reasonable conclusion that can be drawn is that If someone wanna be the best teacher, he/she should commence with these criteria like I said. Also, I ought to admit that my own opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced from my own personal experiences
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who knowing about
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subject matter
.
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are being easygoing with
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students
, and giving praise to
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students
by telling them you’re going right or you should focus and look
carefully
on a subject or any issue.

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with, if someone
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be the
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best
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teacher
, he/she should be easygoing, and it is the most
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important
criteria as they should
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get
into touch with
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students
calm and considerate.
For instance
, when I was in high school, I had a
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teacher
, majored physic, and that
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teacher
all was angry like a cat. That’s why, every
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student
in my
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class
don’t like him much
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because
of his behavior.
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, in the same
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, I had a biology
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she was easygoing and
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, we, my
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, all like that
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, and we can ask her everything about our daily life.

Secondly
,
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should
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to the
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that which point they are missing. If the
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teacher
implement that on the
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students
, I’m sure every
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student
will understand what
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they learning
at school. That’s why,
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can carry out on exams
easily
.
Furthermore
, there is
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will pay attention on a
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student
to
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show
his/her missing points, the
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student’s
success
is increased
by %80. That’s why,
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teachers
ought to pay attention on their students.

To sum up, when all thins
are taken
into consideration, the most reasonable conclusion that can
be drawn
is that If someone
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wanna
be the
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best
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teacher
, he/she should commence with these criteria like I said.
Also
, I ought to admit that my
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own
opinion on this matter has been
profoundly
influenced from my
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own
personal experiences
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IELTS essay the best teacher is one who is very knowledge about subject matter.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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