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study aboard is become increasingly common, especially for young people from countries such as China and India.

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Currently, study aboard is become increasingly common, especiallyfor young people from countries such as China and India. . Visaregulations have become more complex day by day, and the costfor living has increased substantially. Nevertheless, record the numer of students study far home has higher too. Many students and their families clearly consider the experience worth the sacrifices involved. Students oftengive up friendships when they move aboard, in addition, families often usetheir life saving. Moreover, many goverments are willing to invest huge sums of money is sponsoring their student in universities overseas. However, this trend has drawnback as well as advantage for those concerned. for example, German where international student study without tuition fee. Hence, many people over the world come to German to continue study. On anotherhand, The policy of government just pay tuition fee for student from other country. Thus, except this, they haveto pay rent houses taxes, foods. . . by themself. In addition, with middle class, the cost of living may have gotten bunden financial. By the way, most international students find ways of making experience work well for themselves. Most return home, keep in touch by new friends made abroad. futhermore, most find ways of adapting new environment. Overall, the pros don't outweight the cons.
Currently
,
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study
aboard
is become
increasingly
common,
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especiallyfor
young
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people
from countries such as China and India.
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.
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Visaregulations
have become more complex day by day, and the
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costfor
living has increased
substantially
.
Nevertheless
, record the
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numer
of
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students
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study
far home has higher too.
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Many
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students
and their families
clearly
consider the experience worth the sacrifices involved.
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Students
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oftengive
up friendships when they
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move
aboard,
in addition
, families
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often
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usetheir
life saving.
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,
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many
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goverments
are willing to invest huge sums of money is sponsoring their
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student
in universities overseas.
However
, this trend has
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drawnback
as well
as advantage for those concerned.
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for
example, German where international
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student
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study
without tuition fee.
Hence
,
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many
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people
over the world
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come
to German to continue
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study
. On
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anotherhand
, The policy of
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government
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just
pay tuition fee for
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student
from other country.
Thus
, except this, they
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haveto
pay rent
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houses
taxes, foods.
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.
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.
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by
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themself
.
In addition
, with middle
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class
, the cost of living may have gotten
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bunden
financial. By the way, most international
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students
find ways of making experience work well for themselves. Most return home,
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keep
in touch by new friends made abroad.
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futhermore
, most find ways of adapting new environment.
Overall
, the pros don't
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outweight
the cons.

IELTS essay study aboard is become increasingly common, especially for young people from countries such as China and India.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
209 words
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