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how has globalization had an impact on transportation in your country?

how has globalization had an impact on transportation in your country? bDaEW
The fact is that globalization is increasingly expanding among countries. To develop, each country which must support each other and carry out globalization. Vietnam has globalized in many aspects such as economy, education and especially transportation. there are more modern vehicles of transportation including public transport and private vehicle. In this essay I will show how has globalization had an impact on transportation in your country? Firstly, there are many vehicles which have been created and designed to suit the needs of people. For example, in recent years, people just have had bicycles and very few people have motorbikes to use. but these days, people having not only motorbikes but also electric motorbikes and electric bikes. In addition, the first automobiles manufacturing company was established in 2017. Besides in the past, in my country there was only one airline and very few international airports. Currently, there are many airlines in Vietnam such as Jetstar, Vietjet and BamBoo Airways. I think that this is a great development in vietnam’s transportation industry. Secondly, at the present time, transport is having with the investment in technology from other countries. presently, technology has been applied into traffic improve more. For instance, grap app which helps people move from one place to other places easily and quickly. other services are implemented more quickly when transport is applied technology. I think there are two main causes which lead to changes. The first is due to human needs. So government requires these changes and developments. Second, economic development requires all issues must be improved to balance. In addition, cooperation and development is also the reason for these changes. For example, grap not only facilitates the movement of Vietnamese people but also increases the income of the parent company in Malaysia. I think every change has its two sides. these changes have made human life better and easier. Moreover, it has made a lot of impact on the environment. In conclusion, those are the changes and causes when globalization affects transportation. globalization has helped vietnam develop more. I hope my country can continue to globalize but not lose its cultural tradition. Because I believe that traditional culture will be difficult to recover after being lost.
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increasingly
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countries
. To develop, each
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country
which
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must
support each
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other
and carry out globalization. Vietnam has globalized in
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many
aspects such as economy, education and
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transportation
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there
are more modern vehicles of
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transportation
including public transport and private vehicle. In this essay I will
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show
how has globalization had an impact on
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transportation
in your country?

Firstly
, there are
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many
vehicles which have
been created
and designed to suit the needs of
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people
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, in recent years,
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people
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just
have had bicycles and
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few
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people
have motorbikes to
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these days,
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motorbikes
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but
also
electric motorbikes and electric bikes.
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, the
first
automobiles manufacturing
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company
was established
in 2017.
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in the past, in my
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country
there was
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only
one airline and
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few international airports.
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airlines in Vietnam such as Jetstar,
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Vietjet
and
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BamBoo
Airways. I
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development
in
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vietnam
’s
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transportation
industry.
Secondly
, at the present time, transport is having with the investment in technology from
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other
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countries
.
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presently
, technology has
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into traffic
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move
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places
easily
and
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other
services
are implemented
more
quickly
when transport
is applied
technology.

I
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there are two main causes which lead to
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changes
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first
is due to human needs.
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government
requires these
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and
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developments
. Second, economic
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requires all issues
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must
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improved
to balance.
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, cooperation and
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,
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facilitates the movement of Vietnamese
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company
in Malaysia. I
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every
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has its two sides.
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these
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changes
have made human life better and easier.
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, it has made
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a lot of
impact on the environment.

In conclusion
, those are the
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changes
and causes when globalization affects
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transportation
.
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globalization
has
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helped
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vietnam
develop more. I hope my
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country
can continue to globalize
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not lose its cultural tradition.
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I believe that traditional culture will be difficult to recover after
being lost
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IELTS essay how has globalization had an impact on transportation in your country?

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