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One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the colossal upsurge in Immigration is increasing day by day.

One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the colossal upsurge in Immigration is increasing day by day. 75xg2
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the colossal upsurge in Immigration is increasing day by day. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to myriad of concerns in the world. This essay will discuss the advantages, disadvantages and of the the reasons of immigration and what could be the consequences of it using a pragmatic approach. To commence with, there are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one not only includes financial reasons but also includes education and job opportunities. According to the research concluded by the national statistic division more than 90% of the participants acknowledged the benefits showered by Immigration. Secondly, other key aspects related to the Immigration is increasing are under developing countries economy, healthcare, civil rights and technological development. On the other hand, the disadvantages of the above-mentioned idea are not limited to racism, hate problem and legal hindrance to migrants but also include burden to hosting country budget and social facilitation for their citizens. For instance, a survey conducted by the government reveals that the negative impact of Immigration increasing day by day are considerable and should never be underestimated. Lastly, in my opinion, many governments are taking a great initiative in educating its citizens against the negative impacts of rising level of Immigration. Citizens are being encouraged to follow the applicable laws as well as rules and regulations to promote prosperity, productivity, efficiency and positive environment in the world. In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some drawbacks, the benefits of immigration in the world are indeed too dire to ignore. ‘Immigration is increasing day by day, what are the reasons of immigration and what could be the consequences of it’. Write advantages and disadvantages of it.
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today
’s world is the colossal upsurge in
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Immigration
is
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increasing
day by day. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to myriad of concerns in the world. This essay will discuss the advantages, disadvantages and of
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reasons of
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immigration
and what could be the consequences of it using a pragmatic approach.

To commence with, there are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one not
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only
includes financial reasons
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but
also
includes education and job opportunities. According to the research concluded by the national statistic division more than 90% of the participants acknowledged the benefits showered by
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Immigration
.
Secondly
, other key aspects related to the
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Immigration
is
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increasing
are under developing
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countries
economy, healthcare, civil rights and technological development.

On the other hand
, the disadvantages of the above-mentioned
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idea
are not limited to racism, hate problem and legal hindrance to migrants
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but
also
include burden to hosting country budget and social facilitation for their citizens.
For instance
, a survey conducted by the
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government
reveals that the
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negative
impact of
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Immigration
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increasing
day by day are considerable and should never
be underestimated
.

Lastly
, in my opinion,
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many
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governments
are taking a great initiative in educating its citizens against the
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negative
impacts of rising level of
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Immigration
. Citizens are
being encouraged
to follow the applicable laws
as well
as
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rules
and regulations to promote prosperity, productivity, efficiency and
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positive
environment in the world.

In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having
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some
drawbacks, the benefits of
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immigration
in the world are
indeed
too dire to
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ignore
.

‘Immigration is
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increasing
day by day, what are the reasons of
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immigration
and what could be the consequences of it’.

Write advantages and disadvantages of it.
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IELTS essay One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the colossal upsurge in Immigration is increasing day by day.

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
301 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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