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The benefits of community service program for high school

Certain individuals have an opinion if the voluntary community service should be a mandatory program since the high-school in order to help society in various kind of activities. This essay will explain the reason why it is important to include it in the student curriculum. At first, let us explain the elephant in the room in what are the goals of the community service for the high-school student. The plan is obviously critical for the society in which has many disadvantages in many sectors such as micro-economy, basic education, and sanitation. Based on a report from UNDP The community service provides much aid for an underdeveloped living hood. Considering this matter, it seems if the program has various utilities toward the public. Another argument was my personal experiences due to community service was one of the requirements for graduation in my own university. During the program, my group successfully organized an education fair for the high-school student which unconditionally found many brilliant students in a remote area. As the fact that I mention before, sooner and broader the community service becomes an obligation for the student it will encourage the empowerment of our society in
Certain individuals have an opinion if the voluntary
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community
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service
should be a mandatory program since the high-school in order to
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help
society in various kind of activities. This essay will
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explain
the reason why it is
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important
to include it in the
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student
curriculum.

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first
,
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let
us
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explain
the elephant in the room in what are the goals of the
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community
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service
for the high-school
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student
. The plan is
obviously
critical for the society in which has
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many
disadvantages in
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many
sectors such as micro-economy, basic education, and sanitation. Based on a report from UNDP The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
community
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
provides much aid for an underdeveloped living hood. Considering this matter, it seems if the program has various utilities toward the public.

Another argument was my personal experiences due to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
community
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
was one of the requirements for graduation in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
university. During the program, my group
successfully
organized an education
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fair
for the high-school
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student
which
unconditionally
found
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many
brilliant
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students
in a remote area. As the fact that I mention
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before
, sooner and broader the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
community
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
becomes an obligation for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
it will encourage the empowerment of our society in
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IELTS essay The benefits of community service program for high school

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
194 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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