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The benefits of a good friendship

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Having a good friend is is one of the most beautiful things in one’s life. Firstly, you can have someone to share with. People are social creatures and need to communicate with each other. And who can be more suitable to talk to than a friend? Whether about your interests, your future plans or your daily life, sharing makes you feel better. Secondly, a good friend will brighten up your days for no reason. They willingly listen and empathy with you, offer you a shoulder to lean on and support you through rough time. You know it doesn’t make sense for you to hide your emotion because there is always someone to wipe your tears whenever you feel like crying. Last but not least, a good friend will show you the right direction. They know your strengths and weaknesses, so they can help you to make a suitable decision if you feel uncertain about what to do. In conclusion, a good friendship is crucial throughout life and it also has an amazing effect on your life.
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IELTS essay The benefits of a good friendship

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
176 words
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