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The beat way of education.

Only through an excellent way of education system can a country develop, and hence whether girls and boys should co-educate orbe separated into single sex schools has been a debate for decades. On the one hand, in coeducational schools, boys and girls can learn how to deal with the opposite genders. In other words, learning how to mixing in with one another at an early age is a crucial social skill. If they do not learn it, especially in modern societies where most children are the only child of the family having no sibling to understand the opposite genders, they may have communication problems for years. For example, in my country, Iran, where coeducational schooling is prohibited, having limited communication of any sort with the opposite sex until going to university, young people cannot successfully establish an effective rapport. As a result, this misunderstanding can harm their education to a great extent. On the other hand, the disadvantages of such type of educational setting should not be overlooked. One main demerit can be viewed from educational standpoint. It is widely accepted that boys and girls are different in terms of their physical and mental capabilities, so teachers may have to use different techniques and teaching methods to different genders. Take, physical education as an illustration. How is it possible that boys with greater physical abilities do the same activities as the girls who are physically less strong do? As another example, girls are believed to outperform boys in some subjects. As a teacher teaching English at high school, I can say girls are better than boys in terms of linguistic abilities. Therefore, it is clear that teachers should adopt different approaches to different genders. This by itself can affect the atmosphere and the flow of lessons in the classroom. All in all, I tend to think that boys and girls are better to be taught with each other to improve their interpersonal skill and be ready for the interactional challanges that life throws at them.
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separated into single sex schools has been a debate for decades.

On the one hand, in coeducational schools,
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boys
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can learn how to deal with the opposite genders.
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having
no sibling to understand the opposite genders, they may have communication problems for years.
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, in my country, Iran, where coeducational schooling
is prohibited
, having limited communication of any sort with the opposite sex until going to university, young
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cannot
successfully
establish an effective rapport.
As a result
, this misunderstanding can harm their education to a great extent.

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be overlooked
. One main demerit can
be viewed
from educational standpoint. It is
widely
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different
techniques and teaching methods to
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genders. Take, physical education as an illustration. How is it possible that
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boys
with greater physical abilities do the same activities as the
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girls
who are
physically
less strong do? As another example,
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girls
are believed
to outperform
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in
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some
subjects. As a teacher teaching English at high school, I can say
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girls
are better than
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boys
in terms of linguistic abilities.
Therefore
, it is
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clear
that teachers should adopt
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different
approaches to
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different
genders. This by itself can affect the atmosphere and the flow of lessons in the classroom.

All in all, I tend to
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think
that
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boys
and
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are better to
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with each other to
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improve
their interpersonal
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and be ready for the interactional
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challanges
that life throws at them.
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IELTS essay The beat way of education.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
335 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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