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The bar graph below show the percentage of tourists who visited four different attraction from 2014 to 2017

The bar graph below show the percentage of tourists who visited four different attraction from 2014 to 2017 o1Qw9

The information that what number of tourists who visited in Bangkok zoo, sea World, wax museum as well as china town between 2014 and 2017 is rendered by bar graph. From an overall analysis, it is readily apparent that except Bangkok zoo more visited by tourist on other places over the year. With regards to, Bangkok zoo it accounting for 50% in 2014 after that it almost identical in two years in 2015 and 2016 respectively then in last year it shows negligible point at 10%. the percentage of tourists who visited in sea World it comprised to 70% in 2014 thereafter the percentage of tourists remained same at 50% during 2015 and 2016. Moving further, it had been observed that after 2014 more visitors went to wax museum in 2016 the strength of visitors was 80% wheares china town got less popularity then others attraction over the period.

The information that what number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
 who visited in Bangkok zoo, sea World, wax museum as well
 as china town between 2014 and 2017 is rendered
 by bar graph. From an overall
 analysis, it is readily
 apparent that except Bangkok zoo more visited by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourist
 on other places over the year. Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
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 percentage of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
 who visited in sea World it comprised to 70% in 2014 thereafter the percentage of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
 remained same at 50% during 2015 and 2016. Moving further
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 attraction over the period. 