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Multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important.

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It is true that, international companies which are increasing immensely with their produced goods day by day. I completely agree with the statement as being important abroad companies assist to development of economy of the majority countries. though they causes different health problems. Firstly, transnational compamies are huge on the rise, since, output of the these corporations lead to increase financial force of country when they are devoloped perfectly. For this reason, companies try to make more internal and external tradings to become the commonly consumption goods. Besides these companies always make advertising own products in different internet websites On Tv and Radio. This exceed consuquence than they thought plan. For example, Coca Cola company is spread almost all over the world and its branches provide drinks people, additionally, a lot of money is earnt. On the other hand, there are also disadvantages to humans in terms of the benefits of the product produced by the worldwide companies. As well as This significant rise will jeopardize small monopoly businesses. When people consume various drinks. They may be face to diseases in addition to that currently drinks are being produced with high gas content. For instance, most professor have detected in experiment, Coca Cola melts the meat. In conclusion, even though different drinks which are produced by multinational companies come out some health issues to people during consuming drinks, if transnational companies countinue quickly own works, country can obtains great results and its financial force will be more and more.
It is true that, international
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companies
which are increasing
immensely
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goods
day by day. I completely
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important
abroad
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companies
assist to development of economy of the majority countries.
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though
they
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different
health problems.

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, transnational
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compamies
are huge on the rise, since, output of the these corporations lead to increase financial force of country when they are
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devoloped
perfectly
.
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,
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companies
try to
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make
more internal and external tradings to become the
commonly
consumption
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goods
.

Besides
these
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companies
always
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make
advertising
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own
products in
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different
internet websites On
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Tv
and Radio.
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This exceed
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consuquence
than they
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thought
plan.
For example
, Coca Cola
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company
is spread
almost all over the world and its branches provide
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drinks
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people
,
additionally
,
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a lot of
money is
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earnt
.

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, there are
also
disadvantages to humans in terms of the benefits of the product
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produced
by the worldwide
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companies
.
As well
as This significant rise will jeopardize
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small
monopoly businesses. When
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people
consume various
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drinks
. They may be
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face
to diseases
in addition
to that
currently
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drinks
are being
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produced
with high gas content.
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, most professor have detected in experiment, Coca Cola melts the meat.

In conclusion
,
even though
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different
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drinks
which are
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produced
by multinational
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companies
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come
out
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some
health issues to
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people
during consuming
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drinks
, if transnational
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companies
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countinue
quickly
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own
works, country can
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obtains
great results and its financial force will be more and more.
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IELTS essay Multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important.

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249 words
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