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Some people think that Multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important

Some people think that Multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important 52l9m
It is true that, international companies which are increasing immensely with their produced goods day by day. I completely agree with the statement as being important abroad companies assist to development of economy of the majority countries. though they couses different health problems. Firstly, transnational compamies are huge on the rise, since, output of the these corporations lead to increase financial force of country when they are devoloped perfectly. For this reason, companies try to make more internal and external tradings to become the commonly consumption goods. For example, Coca Cola company is spread almost all over the world and its branches provide drinks people, additionally, a lot of money is earnt. On the other hand, the are also disadvantages to humans in terms of the benefits of the product produced by the worlwide companies. When people consume various drinks. They may be face to diseases in addition to that currently drinks are being produced with high gas content. For instance, most professor have ditected in expirement, Coca Cola melt the meat. In conclusion, different drinks which are produced by multinational companies come out some health issue while country obtain great result and its wealth will be more and more.
It is true that, international
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companies
which are increasing
immensely
with their
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produced
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goods
day by day. I completely
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important
abroad
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companies
assist to development of economy of the majority countries.
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couses
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different
health problems.

Firstly
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compamies
are huge on the rise, since, output of the these corporations lead to increase financial force of country when they are
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devoloped
perfectly
.
For this reason
,
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companies
try to
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make
more internal and external tradings to become the
commonly
consumption
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goods
.
For example
, Coca Cola
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company
is spread
almost all over the world and its branches provide
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drinks
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people
,
additionally
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a lot of
money is
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earnt
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On the other hand
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also
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produced
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worlwide
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companies
. When
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people
consume various
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drinks
. They may be
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face
to diseases
in addition
to that
currently
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drinks
are being
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produced
with high gas content.
For instance
, most professor have
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ditected
in
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expirement
, Coca Cola
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melt
the meat.

In conclusion
,
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different
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drinks
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produced
by multinational
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companies
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come
out
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health issue while country obtain great result and its wealth will be more and more.
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IELTS essay Some people think that Multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
200 words
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