Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

the bar graph and pie chart show the percentage of plant species currently threatened and the habitats in which they grow

the bar graph and pie chart show the percentage of plant species currently threatened and the habitats in which they grow XqlwY
the bar graph and pie chart show the percentage of plant species currently threatened, as well as details of the habitats in which they grow, are threatened Overall, most plants around the world are safe, another percentage of plants are facing different levels of vulnerability, and plants in tropical wet forests are at great threat As is presented in the pie chart, it can be seen that had 64. 10% of plants are safe. A remarkable figure is that about 4% of all plants are critically endangered and 6. 29% are endangered. according to statistics from seven habitats, plants that grow in the tropical wet forest are the most at risk, as the chart shows more than 63% of them which mean had around 500 species in serious threat. tropical dry grassland, wetlands, and Tropical wet grassland face comparatively less vulnerability around 4. 5-1. 6%. the desert is the safest place for species to live, just only a 0. 5% possibility of being threatened
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
the
bar graph and pie chart
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
the percentage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plant
species
currently
threatened,
as well
as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of the habitats in which they grow,
are threatened


Overall
, most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plants
around the world are safe, another percentage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plants
are facing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
levels of vulnerability, and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plants
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tropical
wet forests are at great threat

As
is presented
in the pie chart, it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that had 64. 10% of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plants
are safe. A remarkable figure is that about 4% of all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plants
are
critically
endangered and 6. 29%
are endangered
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
according
to statistics from seven habitats,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plants
that grow in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tropical
wet forest are the most at
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
, as the chart
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
more than 63% of them which mean had around 500 species in serious threat.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
tropical
dry grassland, wetlands, and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Tropical
wet grassland face
comparatively
less vulnerability around 4. 5-1. 6%.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
the
desert is the safest place for species to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
a 0. 5% possibility of
being threatened
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay the bar graph and pie chart show the percentage of plant species currently threatened and the habitats in which they grow

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
163 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6.5band
    In the developing and modern world, building houses for living are crucial and hardly choosing.
    In the developing and modern world, building houses for a living are crucial and hardly chosen. While some people believe that freshly constructed homes should be built-in styles of the ancient houses in the neighborhood, others think that people should be able to design and build their own houses, ...
  • 5band
    Recycling is now an essential measure
    Recycling nowadays is an important topic to talk about. Society has created awareness through advertisements, social media, and environmental campaigns. Recycling is not a new topic, it is a topic that has been discussed for a long time. Today, with a society more aware and committed to the environ...
  • 5.5band
    advantages and disdvantages of foreign aids
    Foreign aid is the giving or loaning of resources from one country to another. It usually involves money, labor, or materials, but can include food, water, or other commodities that may be necessary to provide assistance to local population groups. In this essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of...
  • 5band
    Some experts believe cyclists should take a test before entring public roads. with this statement?
    Nowadays a number of people prefer to us bicycles instead of transportations or cars. Cycling us kind of physical activity for them. But some scientists believe that license for biking should be given to individuals. I don not agree to this statement. In this essay I will discuss both sides and expr...
  • 5band
    parents should attend courses about take care children
    First and foremost, professional guidance is regarded as most outstanding when talking about parents attend child care courses. When parents join child care class, they guided by experts on children. From it, they received a lot of experience about take care of child how is true. Especially, thanks ...
  • 5band
    Some people think that the best way to reduce poverty is to give people 6 years of free education. Do you agreed or disagreed?
    In developing countries, poverty is always an unsolvable problem. Some people think that the best way to reduce poverty is to give people 6 years of free education. This essay will explain why I don’t completely agree with this opinion. Offering 6 years of free education offers many benefits. First...





Get more results for topic:
  • the bar graph and pie chart show the percentage of plant species currently threatened and the habitats in which they grow