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Recycling is now an essential measure

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Recycling nowadays is an important topic to talk about. Society has created awareness through advertisements, social media, and environmental campaigns. Recycling is not a new topic, it is a topic that has been discussed for a long time. Today, with a society more aware and committed to the environment, the awareness that was so sought after was finally achieved and put into practice. On the other hand, it is an issue that is constantly developing. Day after day, we can see how products designed to be environmentally friendly are entering the market.
Recycling nowadays is an
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important
topic to talk about. Society has created awareness through advertisements, social media, and environmental campaigns. Recycling is not a new topic, it is a topic that has
been discussed
for a long time.

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Today
, with a society more aware and committed to the environment, the awareness that was
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so
sought after was
finally
achieved and put into practice.
On the other hand
, it is an issue
that is
constantly
developing. Day after day, we can
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see
how products designed to be
environmentally
friendly are entering the market.
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IELTS essay Recycling is now an essential measure

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
92 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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