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the bar chart shows hours per week that teenegers spent on certain weekin Chester from 2002 to 2007

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The bar chart illustrates the hours every week spent doing activities by adolescents in Chester from 2002 to 2007, Chart has different entertainment, which are(going to pubs, watching TV, shopping, homework, sports, DVDs and bowling. Overall, watching television had the higher value in graph and least activity done by them was bowling. In terms of television, every year has a greater ratio and it went around 38% in 2007 while going to pubs by teenagers was the second most activity. On the other hand, shopping had the 15% in 2007 and 2006, and it increased from 7% in 2002. Furthermore in sports it was 10% in 2002 and decreased drastically till 2% in 2007, watching DVDs was 11% in 2002and it increased till 17% in 2004, but then it reduced every year by 10% in 2007. Moreover, bowling which was least in every year as 4% in 2002 and after decreasing every year it went to 1% in 2007.
The bar chart illustrates the hours every week spent doing activities by adolescents in Chester from 2002 to 2007, Chart has
different
entertainment, which are
(
going to pubs, watching TV, shopping, homework, sports, DVDs and bowling.

Overall
, watching television had the higher value in graph and least activity done by them was bowling.

In terms of television, every
year
has a greater ratio and it went around 38% in 2007 while going to pubs by
teenagers
was the second most activity.
On the other hand
, shopping had the 15% in 2007 and 2006, and it increased from 7% in 2002.

Furthermore
in sports it was 10% in 2002 and decreased
drastically
till 2% in 2007, watching DVDs was 11% in 2002and it increased till 17% in 2004,
but
then it
reduced
every
year
by 10% in 2007.

Moreover
, bowling which was least in every
year
as 4% in 2002 and after decreasing every
year
it went to 1% in 2007.
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IELTS essay the bar chart shows hours per week that teenegers spent on certain weekin Chester from 2002 to 2007

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