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The bar chart presents information about the total number of minutes of calls, divided into three types of category, that made by a British since 1995 to 2002.

The bar chart presents information about the total number of minutes of calls, divided into three types of category, that made by a British since 1995 to 2002. W8dxK

The bar chart presents information about the total number of minutes of calls, divided into three types of category, that made by a British since 1995 to 2002. Generally, the vast majority of British used a local (fixed line) telephone calls during this period. However, the other types such as National and International telephone calls (fixed line) were increase as well as call made by a mobiles. Following this data, the most of people in the UK made a local calls by 70 billions of minutes in the starting year (1995). It continued to risen and reached at the top by 90 billions of minutes in the next forth years (1999). However, the trend plunged gradually in following years and reached by 70 billions of minutes in 2002 as well as in 1995. On the contrary, the number of user that used a National and International (fixed line) were climbed steadily during this period, that accounted in 1995 made by 35 billions of minutes and reached almost twofold from the starting year, made by 60 billions in 2002. On the other side, fewer British people used a mobiles (all calls) that accounted for less than 5 billions of minutes. Surprisingly, the trend showed went up and reached at the top by nearly 50 billions of minutes at the end of period.

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