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The bad side of fast fashion

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I believe that most of you at least shop on shopee, lazada or amazon for trendy clothes with dirt cheap prices. This is also one type of fast fashion. (So what is it? )So Fast fashion is a term used to describe a highly profitable and exploitative business model based on replicating catwalk trends and high-fashion designs, mass-producing them at low cost. Due to the high demand for keeping up to date with all of the trends, this kind of fashion is on the rise recently especially just paying for only ⅓ of the amount compared to high-fashion designs. At its heart, businesses try to infect customers with the desire for buying a lot, quickly not to be behind the time. But in turn for the crazy cheapness and greed for profits, the quality is like “ instant noodles”, only wearable for once.
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⅓ of the amount compared to high-fashion designs. At its heart, businesses try to infect customers with the desire for buying a lot,
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not to be behind the time.
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in turn for the crazy cheapness and greed for profits, the quality is like
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IELTS essay The bad side of fast fashion

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1 paragraphs
143 words
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