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I will give you a task while I am away for two days.

I will give you a task while I am away for two days. 1mDGn
To: Mary Smith, Property Sales Department From: Richard Barry, Manager of Clacton Business Properties Subject: job requirements for details of properties for sale and buy a new copier Date: today’s date I will give you a task while I am away for two days. The first task I want you to do is to send detailed information about the property for sale to the post office as soon as possible. In addition, you need to double-check the addresses of the people you send to carefully and correctly. We need to be careful when sending to the right place and not keep anyone waiting. Because last week three letters did not go to the right address and this has damaged our company's reputation. The last task I want to give you is to contact Mr. Alan Foot, we have an appointment to buy a copier from him today. Please send my apologies to him for not being able to meet him today. Help me make an appointment with him next week. I will appreciate it if you complete the tasks that I give you the best.
To: Mary Smith, Property Sales Department

From: Richard Barry, Manager of
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Clacton
Business Properties

Subject: job requirements for
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details
of properties for sale and
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buy
a new copier

Date:
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today
’s date

I will give you a
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task
while I am away for two days.

The
first
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task
I want you to do is to
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send
detailed information about the property for sale to the post office as
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soon
as possible.
In addition
, you need to double-
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check
the addresses of the
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people
you
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send
to
carefully
and
correctly
. We need to be careful when sending to the right place and not
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keep
anyone
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waiting
.
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Because
last week three letters did not go to the right address and this has damaged our
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company
's reputation.

The last
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task
I want to give you is to contact Mr. Alan Foot, we have an appointment to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a copier from him
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
.
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Please
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send
my apologies to him for not being able to
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meet
him
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today
.
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Help
me
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make
an appointment with him
next
week.

I will appreciate it if you complete the
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tasks
that I give you the best.
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IELTS essay I will give you a task while I am away for two days.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
185 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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