Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

THE AVERAGE STANDARD OF PEOPLE'S HEALTH IS LIKELY TO BE LOWERIN THE FUTURE THAN IT IS NOW

THE AVERAGE STANDARD OF PEOPLE'S HEALTH IS LIKELY TO BE LOWERIN THE FUTURE THAN IT IS NOW wOOoN
DUE TO FAST PACE OF DEVELOPMENT THE WAY OF LEAVING CHANGES RAPIDLY. NOWADAYS, MORE AND MORE PEOPLE TEND TO EAT FAST FOOD INSTEAD OF HEALTHY FOOD SO IT AFFECT THEIR HEALTH AND IT HAS DETRIMENATAL ON THEIR HEALTHEY LIFE. HOWEVER, IN THE FUTURE PEOPLE BECOME MORE UNFIT DUE TO THIS TYPE OF LIFESTYLE. I COMPLETLE AGREE WITH STATEMENT AND REASON BEHIND MY INCLINATION DISCUSSED FURTHER. IN THIS CONTMPRORY EPOC WHERE PEOPLE BECOME MORE MATIRIALISTIC THEY DO NOT HAVE MUCH TIME TO COOK FOOD BECUASE IT WASTE THEIR TIME BUT CONSUMING THIS TYPE OF JUNK FOOD HAS WORST OUTCOMES IN THEIR HEALTHY LIFE. DUE TO RAPID ADVANCMENT IN TECHNOLOGY IDIVIDUALS PLACE THEIR ORDER BY ONE TOUCH ONTHEIR PHONE SO IT IS EASY TO GET FOOD, HOWEVER, THE QUALITY OF FOOD IS GOOD BUT IT HAS ALSO DETRIMENTAL EFFECT ON THEIR HEALTHY LIVES. FOR INSTENCE, A PERSON WHO CONSUME OLILY FOOD ON DAILY BASES HAS BECOME A VICTIM OF OBESITY AND IT ALSO AFFECT ON THEIR BODY COLESTROL SO, IT ACCURE WITH THE DICESEAS OF HEART ATTECK. FURTHERMORE, IN THIS ERA PEOPLE DO SMART WORK INSTED OF HARD WORK SO THIS WAS A SECOND REASON WHICH HAS NEGATIVE EFFECT UPON THEIR HEALTHY LIFE STYLE. INTERNET CHANGES OUR LIVES AND IT HAS BECOME AN INTEGRAL PART OF OUR DAILY LIFE. NOWADAYS, MORE AND MORE PEOPLE DO WORK FROM HOME AND THEY DO NOT GO FOR GYM FOR THEIR PHYSICAL FITNNESS SO, THEY BECOME MODESET AND LETHERGIC DAY BY DAY SO IT WOULD AFFECT THEIR HEALTHY LIFE STYLE. FOR SET AN EXAMPLE, DUE TO CORONA PPENDAMIC PEOPLE MUST DO THEIR WORK FROM THEIR HOME AND THAT IS WHY THEY BECOME MORE OBBESE BECUASE THEIR BODY DO NOT WORK PHYSICALY SO IN THIS TIME PEOPLE ARE BECOME MORE LETHERGIC. TO CONCLUDE, TO REDUCE THE HEALTH ISSUE FROM OUR DAILY LIVES PEOPLE MUST FOLLOW A DIET AND CHANGE THEIR EATING HABBIT, ALTHOUGH THE ALSO GO FOR A GYM FOR KEEP THEIR BODY FIT.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
DUE
TO
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
FAST
PACE OF DEVELOPMENT THE WAY OF LEAVING
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
CHANGES
RAPIDLY
. NOWADAYS, MORE AND MORE
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
PEOPLE
TEND TO EAT
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
FAST
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
FOOD
INSTEAD
OF
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
HEALTHY
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
FOOD
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
SO
IT AFFECT THEIR HEALTH AND IT HAS
Possible spelling mistake found.
DETRIMENATAL
ON THEIR
Possible spelling mistake found.
HEALTHEY
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
LIFE
.
HOWEVER
, IN THE FUTURE
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
PEOPLE
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
BECOME
MORE UNFIT
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
DUE
TO THIS TYPE OF LIFESTYLE. I
Possible spelling mistake found.
COMPLETLE
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
AGREE
WITH STATEMENT AND REASON BEHIND MY INCLINATION DISCUSSED
FURTHER
.

IN THIS
Possible spelling mistake found.
CONTMPRORY
Possible spelling mistake found.
EPOC
WHERE
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
PEOPLE
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
BECOME
MORE
Possible spelling mistake found.
MATIRIALISTIC
THEY DO NOT

HAVE MUCH TIME TO COOK
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
FOOD
Possible spelling mistake found.
BECUASE
IT WASTE THEIR TIME
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
BUT
CONSUMING THIS TYPE OF JUNK
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
FOOD
HAS
A determiner is probably missing here: "the WORST".
WORST
OUTCOMES IN THEIR
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
HEALTHY
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
LIFE
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
DUE
TO RAPID
Possible spelling mistake found.
ADVANCMENT
IN TECHNOLOGY
Possible spelling mistake found.
IDIVIDUALS
PLACE THEIR ORDER BY ONE TOUCH
Possible spelling mistake found.
ONTHEIR
PHONE
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
SO
IT IS EASY TO
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
GET
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
FOOD
,
HOWEVER
, THE QUALITY OF
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
FOOD
IS
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
GOOD
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
BUT
IT HAS
ALSO
DETRIMENTAL EFFECT ON THEIR
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
HEALTHY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
LIVES
. FOR
Possible spelling mistake found.
INSTENCE
, A PERSON WHO CONSUME
Possible spelling mistake found.
OLILY
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
FOOD
ON DAILY BASES HAS
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
BECOME
A VICTIM OF OBESITY AND IT
ALSO
Did you mean "effect"?
AFFECT
ON THEIR BODY
Possible spelling mistake found.
COLESTROL
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
SO
, IT
Possible spelling mistake found.
ACCURE
WITH THE
Possible spelling mistake found.
DICESEAS
OF HEART
Possible spelling mistake found.
ATTECK
.

FURTHERMORE
, IN THIS ERA
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
PEOPLE
DO SMART
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
WORK
Possible spelling mistake found.
INSTED
OF
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
HARD
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
WORK
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
SO
THIS WAS A SECOND REASON WHICH HAS
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
NEGATIVE
EFFECT UPON THEIR
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
HEALTHY
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
LIFE
STYLE. INTERNET
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
CHANGES
OUR
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
LIVES
AND IT HAS
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
BECOME
AN INTEGRAL PART OF OUR DAILY
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
LIFE
. NOWADAYS, MORE AND MORE
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
PEOPLE
DO
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
WORK
FROM HOME AND THEY DO NOT GO FOR GYM FOR THEIR PHYSICAL
Possible spelling mistake found.
FITNNESS
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
SO
, THEY
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
BECOME
Possible spelling mistake found.
MODESET
AND
Possible spelling mistake found.
LETHERGIC
DAY BY DAY
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
SO
IT WOULD AFFECT THEIR
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
HEALTHY
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
LIFE
STYLE. FOR SET AN EXAMPLE,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
DUE
TO CORONA
Possible spelling mistake found.
PPENDAMIC
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
PEOPLE
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
MUST
DO THEIR
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
WORK
FROM THEIR HOME AND
THAT IS
WHY THEY
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
BECOME
MORE
Possible spelling mistake found.
OBBESE
Possible spelling mistake found.
BECUASE
THEIR BODY DO NOT
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
WORK
Possible spelling mistake found.
PHYSICALY
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
SO
IN THIS TIME
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
PEOPLE
ARE
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
BECOME
MORE
Possible spelling mistake found.
LETHERGIC
.

TO CONCLUDE
, TO
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
REDUCE
THE HEALTH ISSUE FROM OUR DAILY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
LIVES
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
PEOPLE
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
MUST
FOLLOW A DIET AND
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
CHANGE
THEIR EATING
Possible spelling mistake found.
HABBIT
, ALTHOUGH THE
ALSO
GO FOR A GYM FOR
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
KEEP
THEIR BODY FIT.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay THE AVERAGE STANDARD OF PEOPLE'S HEALTH IS LIKELY TO BE LOWERIN THE FUTURE THAN IT IS NOW

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
327 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts