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The arts including music and theratre are considered to be important in society.

The arts including music and theratre are considered to be important in society. 7WLd2

Creative pleasures such as viewing fine arts, listen to music, and watching a play are treated by many as enjoyable and essential as part of their everybody living. firstly, this essay will discuss how the arts are a cruical element in most people lives and secondly will discuss how it is vital that creative subjects are included in the school curriculum. Firstly, the creative arts, such as paintings, sculptures, music and theratre have a long and ardent history throughout the ages. they have grown and envolved with the times, appealing to new generations every year, in order to keep being a part of everybody life. people enjoy the arts, often as an escape from their lives, listening to music the enjoy, going to see a play with friends or visting galleriea and musceums.

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