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The article states that one dinosaur fossil which recently discovered fortunately has remained complete somehow different parts such aS bone hallow and its inside materials and soft tissue collagen can be detested.

The article states that one dinosaur fossil which recently discovered fortunately has remained complete somehow different parts such aS bone hallow and its inside materials and soft tissue collagen can be detested. 5621A
The article states that one dinosaur fossil which recently discovered fortunately has remained complete somehow different parts such aS bone hallow and its inside materials and soft tissue collagen can be detested. The article provide three reason for that. however, the professor has not thought this and he believe that this fossil does not have these materials and other sources should be considered for this material. he opposes each reason stated by the writer. First, the article avers that the dinosaur’s fossil reveals many small branched channels which is related to hollow bone structure of animal and the materials in these channels are related to red blood cells. In contrast the lecturer opposes this idea by saying that soft tissue which is flexible and sensible cannot remained intact in this long time. he states that they are bacterial organic materials which is remained behind of bacterial colonies activity in this period of time. Second, the article claims that microscopic examination showed several sphere structure in the animal bone fossil which is connected to red blood cells of T, rex. however, the professor avers that dinosaurs do not have red blood cells, and these red materials probably can be redish materials. Third, the article brings another evidence to show the importance of this discovery by telling about scientific test which showed this fossil has collagen in its leg bone. On the other hand, the professor refutes this claim by explaining that nobody has found soft protein material such as collagen in much newer fossils. he states that it is so improbable which collagen remained intact for this long period of time and this collagen comes from another resources like researcher skin.
The
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article
states that one dinosaur
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fossil
which recently discovered
fortunately
has
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remained
complete somehow
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different
parts such
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aS
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bone
hallow and its inside
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materials
and soft tissue collagen can
be detested
. The
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article
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provide
three reason for that.
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however
, the professor has not
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thought
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this and
he
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believe
that this
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fossil
does not have these
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materials
and other sources should
be considered
for this
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material
.
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he
opposes each reason stated by the writer.

First
, the
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article
avers that the dinosaur’s
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fossil
reveals
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many
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small
branched channels which
is related
to hollow
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bone
structure of animal and the
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materials
in these channels
are related
to
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red
blood cells. In
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contrast
the lecturer opposes this
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idea
by saying that soft tissue which is flexible and sensible cannot
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remained
intact in this long time.
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he
states that they are bacterial organic
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materials
which is
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remained
behind of bacterial
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colonies
activity in this period of time.

Second, the
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article
claims that microscopic examination
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showed
several sphere structure in the animal
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bone
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fossil
which
is connected
to
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red
blood cells of T,
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rex
.
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however
, the professor avers that dinosaurs do not have
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red
blood cells, and these
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red
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materials
probably
can be
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redish
materials.

Third, the
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article
brings another evidence to
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show
the importance of this discovery by telling about scientific
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test
which
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showed
this
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fossil
has collagen in its leg
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bone
.
On the other hand
, the professor refutes this claim by explaining that nobody has found soft protein
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material
such as collagen in much newer
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fossils
.
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he
states that it is
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so
improbable which collagen
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remained
intact for this long period of time and this collagen
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comes
from another resources like researcher skin.
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IELTS essay The article states that one dinosaur fossil which recently discovered fortunately has remained complete somehow different parts such aS bone hallow and its inside materials and soft tissue collagen can be detested.

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280 words
5.5
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