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Both the article and the lecture talk about the new ecological sustainable foresty approach and its effect on the U. S. wood companies. The article states that this eco-certification won't affects the U. S. wood companies and U. S. people. It procides three reasons of support. On the other hand, the professor does not believe so and refuts all the autho'reasons. First, the article avers that people in U. S. faced a lot of adverrtisment and then folks won't pay much attention to them. Because many usuall companies' product included " new" or 'improved" label people will not get them serious. It will happen for the eco-certification wood goods. However, the professor rebuts this idea by mentioning that people distinguish the difference between a lable from the company and one from a third unbiased company with an international reputation. Hence, this eco-certified label can convince them to buy those products. Second, the article asserts that having this certifaication will increase the cost of the wood and logically niether companies nor coustomers want to tolerate this expences. It concludes that this more expencive wood products won't be successful in sell. Conversely, the professor avers that a research showed that if this price difference between th eco friendly wood and usual wood products is less than five percent as it is for the eco-certified wood products, people will pay for that willingly because they take care about the envvironment. Third, the reading claims that American companies which won't sell their products abroad, do not need to take these validation to compete with European wood companies, since U. S. people are their coustomers and they buy those products. Controversially, the lecturer believe that it is not about the competition across the board, it is need to take these certification to be able to compete with European companies in the U. S. market, where American companies should compete with European to take advantage of the U. S. market.
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and the lecture talk about the new ecological sustainable
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approach and its effect on the U. S.
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wood
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companies
. The
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article
states that this
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eco-certification
won't
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affects
the U. S.
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companies
and U. S.
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. It
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procides
three reasons of support.
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, the professor does not believe
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and
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refuts
all the
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'reasons.

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, the
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avers that
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people
in U. S. faced
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a lot of
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adverrtisment
and then folks won't pay much attention to them.
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many
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usuall
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companies
'
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included
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;
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; or '
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; label
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people
will not
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them serious. It will happen for the
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eco-certification
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by mentioning that
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distinguish the difference between a
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lable
from the
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company
and one from a third unbiased
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with an international reputation.
Hence
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eco-certified
label can convince them to
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buy
those products.

Second, the
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article
asserts that having this
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certifaication
will increase the cost of the
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wood
and
logically
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niether
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companies
nor
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coustomers
want to tolerate this
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expences
. It concludes that this more
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expencive
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wood
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won't be successful in sell.
Conversely
, the professor avers that
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that if this price difference between
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eco friendly
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and usual
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wood
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products
is less than five percent as it is for the
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eco-certified
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wood
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,
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people
will pay for that
willingly
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because
they take care about the
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envvironment
.

Third, the reading claims that American
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companies
which won't sell their
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products
abroad, do not need to take
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these validation
to compete with European
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wood
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companies
, since U. S.
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people
are their
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coustomers and
they
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buy
those
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products
.
Controversially
, the lecturer believe that it is not about the competition across the board, it
is need
to take
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these certification
to be able to compete with European
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companies
in the U. S. market, where American
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companies
should compete with European to take advantage of the U. S. market.
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IELTS essay tpo 07

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
324 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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