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In recent years there has been a dramatic increase in the availability of organic foods Organic foods are regulated by the government thus in order to officially be termed organic they must be grown without pesticides or artificial fertilizers In just a s

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Both the essay and the lecture talk about the pros and cons of organic foods. While the author mentions three benefits of organic products for human and environment, the lecturer repudiates those theories and states benefits of organic foods are a misconception, then he opposes all the reasons were explained in the essay. First, the professor asserts that this idea that roganic foods do not contain hazardous chemical like ordinary non-organic foods, is not correct. He adds that organic food producers use a natural chemical, named rottenen, which has a very detrimental effedct on children. Recent researchs showed that there is a connection between rottenen and disease in children, he said. He believes that counsumers should know about these facts. Therefore, this note that organic foods improve the overall health of consomers is rejected by the professor. Second, the lecturer posits that in accordance to the benefits of organic production practice for envirtonment, we should consider that this practice has 20 percent less yield rether than conventional agriculture method. To compensate this, organic producers will use more land, which it ends up cutting down forest. In addition it will led to less diversity of animals and plants species. He insists that just becuase of less using some pesticides and fertilizers, we should not ignore these detrimental impacts of organic food production on environment. As we see, the writer's idea about the benefits of organic foods for the environment does not hold water. Third, the speaker points out that since organic foods have become popular and omnipresence, many big companies have involved in this field. Nowadays, many of big producers sell their organic goods through thier companies' branches. He wanted students to pay attention to the labels of organic foods next time they buy. With this explanaion, the professor rebuts this idea that buying organic foods will help small corporations or family run farms.
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. While the author mentions three
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products for human and environment, the lecturer repudiates those theories and states
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benefits
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organic
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foods
are a misconception, then he opposes all the reasons were
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, the professor asserts that this
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roganic
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do not contain hazardous chemical like ordinary non-organic
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, is not correct. He
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adds
that
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producers
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use
a natural chemical, named
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, which has a
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on children. Recent
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and disease in children, he said. He believes that
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counsumers
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the
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health of
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consomers
is rejected
by the professor.

Second, the lecturer posits that in accordance to the
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production practice for
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envirtonment
, we should consider that this practice has 20 percent less yield
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rether
than conventional agriculture method. To compensate this,
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producers will
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use
more land, which it ends up cutting down forest. In
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to less diversity of animals and plants species. He insists that
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pesticides and fertilizers, we should not
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ignore
these detrimental impacts of
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food
production on environment. As we
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, the writer's
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about the
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for the environment does not hold water.

Third, the speaker points out that since
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have become popular and omnipresence,
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big
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have involved in this field. Nowadays,
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producers sell their
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organic
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goods
through
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thier
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companies
' branches. He wanted students to pay attention to the labels of
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next
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, the professor rebuts this
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idea
that buying
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will
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help
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small
corporations or family run farms.
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IELTS essay In recent years there has been a dramatic increase in the availability of organic foods Organic foods are regulated by the government thus in order to officially be termed organic they must be grown without pesticides or artificial fertilizers In just a s

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
313 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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