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The article claims that conversion time of work benefits both businesses and employees and provides three reason of support.

The article claims that conversion time of work benefits both businesses and employees and provides three reason of support. e51MJ
The article claims that conversion time of work benefits both businesses and employees and provides three reason of support. however, the professor saying that it's ok but sometimes and he refutes each of author's reasons. First, the author explains that a 4-day workweek will alleviate some considerable expenses. however, the lecture opposes this point by it's true but not always. he claims that how much money may save that's not enough to start new job. For example, a employee if he save 540 dollars in year, it is not enough. Second, the article avers reducing the number of working days will lower the operating costs. While, the professor reject this point by montion that it's not true. he explains that reducing the number of working days could hurt to buisness. he states that even though this change time working save for fixed expenses, but work efficiency will lower than before. Third, a 4-day workweek will improve the ability of employee to spend time with their families. however, the professor contends this reason by stating that it's not always true. he claims that children young will have stressful task when begin their school.
The article claims that conversion time of work benefits both businesses and employees and provides three reason of support.
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however
, the professor saying that
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it's
ok
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but
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
sometimes and
he refutes each of author's reasons.

First
, the author
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explains
that a 4-day workweek will alleviate
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some
considerable expenses.
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however
, the lecture opposes this point by
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it's
true
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but
not
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always
.
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he
claims that how much money may save that's not
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enough
to
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start
new job.
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,
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a
employee if he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "saves", "saved".
save
540 dollars in year, it is not
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enough
.

Second, the article avers reducing the number of working days will lower the operating costs.
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While
, the professor reject this point by
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montion
that
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it's
not true.
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he
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explains
that reducing the number of working days could hurt to
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buisness
.
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he
states that
even though
this
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change
time working save for
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fixed
expenses,
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but
work efficiency will lower than
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before
.

Third, a 4-day workweek will
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improve
the ability of employee to spend time with their families.
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however
, the professor contends this reason by stating that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
it's
not always true.
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he
claims that children young will have stressful task when
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
their school.

IELTS essay The article claims that conversion time of work benefits both businesses and employees and provides three reason of support.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
192 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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