Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The article and lecture are both about migrating humpback whales.

The article and lecture are both about migrating humpback whales. 6xkyj

The article and lecture are both about migrating humpback whales. The professor says that these creatures have a fascinating migrate method but the evidence in the reading is not convenient for the following reasons. First of all, the issue of intelligent humpback whales. The teacher mentions that there is no relation between the high-level ability of animals and migration because many birds are navigating like ducks. Also, he says that ducks do not have a high-level brain to help them to migrate. As a result, there is no connection between intelligence and animals traveling. On the other ways, the reading asserts that these whales have a high-level brain to migrate. Secondly, the trouble of migrating whales in a straight line. The professor mentions that the whale's brains are sensitive to the magnetic field. this brain ability helps them to migrate in one direction. In other words, these animals orient by a magnetic field, not by start like other animals. However, the reading asserts that whales depend on start on migration. Finally, the problem of unusual behavior, spy hopping. The lecturer says that it is true, these whales are able to look to the sky but they do not use this behavior to navigate. He says that the sharks also have this character But they use it to hunt prey

The article and lecture are both about migrating humpback You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmammalporpoise
whales
. The professor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrespondclaimconveyspeaksuggestadd
says
 that these creatures have a fascinating migrate method This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the evidence in the reading is not convenient for the following reasons.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the issue of intelligent humpback You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmammalporpoise
whales
. The teacher mentions that there is no relation between the high-level ability of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 and migration This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 birds are navigating like ducks. Also
, he You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrespondclaimconveyspeaksuggestadd
says
 that ducks do not have a high-level You use this word too often, consider replacing it withintellect
brain
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them to migrate. As a result
, there is no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :correlation between
connection between
 intelligence and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 traveling. On the other ways, the reading asserts that these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmammalporpoise
whales
 have a high-level You use this word too often, consider replacing it withintellect
brain
 to migrate.

Secondly
, the trouble of migrating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmammalporpoise
whales
 in a straight line. The professor mentions that the whale's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withintellect
brains
 are sensitive to the magnetic field. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThis
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withintellect
brain
 ability This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 them to migrate in one direction. In other words
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 orient by a magnetic field, not by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 like other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
. However
, the reading asserts that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmammalporpoise
whales
 depend on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 on migration.

Finally
, the problem of unusual behavior, spy hopping. The lecturer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrespondclaimconveyspeaksuggestadd
says
 that it is true, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmammalporpoise
whales
 are able to look to the sky This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 this behavior to navigate. He You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrespondclaimconveyspeaksuggestadd
says
 that the sharks also
 have this character This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it to hunt Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphprey.prey!prey?prey:prey,prey;
prey