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Some people think that travelling alone is better while others prefer to be in a group when they travel Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Some people think that travelling alone is better while others prefer to be in a group when they travel Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 9LGjn
Travel is an individualistic choice, and depends on a boundless list of personal preferences. Travelling solo or in group is a part of that list. Travelling in group is my personal preference. With Facebook and YouTube promoting Solo Travels, even though people are going crazy over solo trips, I always travel with either my family members or my friends, not because I'm scared of travelling alone. Here I present various reasons to support my choice. Travelling solo may seem exciting, but it has its drawbacks as well. One of them is lack of acquaintances. Travel acquaintances are important for various purposes, such as medical emergencies, or emergency phone calls or any other emergency situations, especially if someone is traveling to a remote and lonesome locations or on a dangerous trekking. Let's suppose, I'm an introvert, hence I simply enjoy lone time, and I'm on a trek to the Himalayas by myself. Suddenly during a long hike, I get caught up with mountain or hill diarrhoea. I truly believe that in these desperate times, a group of people as travel buddies, or family members, or even a tour guide, would have been lifesavers. Travelling in groups is economical. Travelling in groups will help me to not cut down on my wishlist and fun activities such as scuba-diving, or sky-diving, or shopping. When travelling solo, people need to fix their budgets at let's say, $5, 000. The entire trip needs to be planned and executed with that amount. When travelling in groups, the total budget and expenses are shared among the group members. Also, travelling in groups help me to make new connections, if I'm a part of a group other than my family and friends. I'm a gregarious person and meeting new people, learning about their cultures (if they are foreigners). are bullet points in my list of hobbies. For instance, I, along with my parents, was on a trip to the northern park of the state of Sikkim, India. We had four French Students and a lady from Kenya with us on the team. Throughout that tour, I was able to learn about French Culture and life of people in Kenya. To sum up, I personally choose to travel in groups, given the various advantages of travelling in groups.
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is an individualistic choice, and depends on a boundless list of personal preferences.
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Travelling
solo or in
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group
is a part of that list.
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Travelling
in
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group
is my personal preference. With Facebook and YouTube promoting Solo
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Travels
,
even though
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people
are going crazy over solo trips, I always
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travel
with either my family members or my friends, not
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because
I'm scared of
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travelling
alone. Here I present various reasons to support my choice.

Travelling solo may seem exciting,
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but
it has its drawbacks
as well
. One of them is lack of acquaintances.
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Travel
acquaintances are
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important
for various purposes, such as medical emergencies, or emergency phone calls or any other emergency situations,
especially
if someone is traveling to a remote and lonesome locations or on a
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dangerous
trekking.
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Let
's suppose, I'm an introvert,
hence
I
simply
enjoy lone time, and I'm on a trek to the Himalayas by myself.
Suddenly
during a long hike, I
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get
caught up with mountain or hill
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diarrhoea
. I
truly
believe that in these desperate times, a
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group
of
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people
as
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travel
buddies, or family members, or even a tour guide, would have been lifesavers.

Travelling in
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groups
is economical.
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Travelling
in
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groups
will
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help
me to not
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cut
down on my wishlist and fun activities such as scuba-diving, or sky-diving, or shopping. When
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travelling
solo,
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people
need to
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fix
their budgets at
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let
's say, $5, 000. The entire trip needs to
be planned
and executed with that amount. When
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travelling
in
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groups
, the total budget and expenses
are shared
among the
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group
members.

Also
,
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travelling
in
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groups
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help
me to
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make
new connections, if I'm a part of a
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group
other than my family and friends. I'm a gregarious person and meeting new
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people
, learning about their cultures (if they are foreigners).
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are
bullet points in my list of hobbies.
For instance
, I, along with my parents, was on a trip to the northern park of the state of Sikkim, India. We had four French Students and a lady from Kenya with us on the team. Throughout that tour, I was able to learn about French Culture and life of
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people
in Kenya.

To sum up, I
personally
choose to
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travel
in
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groups
,
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given
the various advantages of
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travelling
in
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groups
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that travelling alone is better while others prefer to be in a group when they travel Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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