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In 1995, the amount of money people in London paid to buy a house was 200000 pounds, while the average house prices in England stood at approximately 130000. In 2013, there were roughly 430000 pounds for purchasing house in London. At the same time, people in England spent 200000 pounds of average house prices. In 2013, the amount of money in London purchased average house prices stood at 400000 being the highest of the total average house prices in other country. Meanwhile, North East being the lowest, stood at 100000 pounds. The South East people in the England expenditure on house prices was 320000 pounds, whereas the figure for the South West slightly lower at 270000 pounds. At the same time, 200000 pounds was used to purchase house in the North West, compared to 100000 pounds Midlands expense.
In 1995, the amount of money
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in England stood at approximately 130000. In 2013, there were roughly
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430000 pounds
for purchasing
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in London. At the same time,
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in England spent
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200000 pounds
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In 2013, the amount of money in London
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stood at 400000 being the highest of the total
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in other country. Meanwhile, North East being the lowest, stood at
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100000 pounds
. The South East
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in the England expenditure on
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was
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320000 pounds
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slightly
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270000 pounds
. At the same time,
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200000 pounds
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in the North West, compared to
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100000 pounds
Midlands expense.
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IELTS essay the amount of money people in London paid to buy a house

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
138 words
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