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The amount of money famous sport people gain

The amount of money famous sport people gain 2Pgdb

This is a complex question. Nowadays, we have so normalize that most of the football, tennis, soccer. . . players are paid too much and personally speaking, this have to change. It is true that famous athletes bring us so much entertainment and, at some point, they make us forget about our problems. At the same time, we can not forget that most of them, have worked really hard to be where they are and the salary that they gain can be like a reward for that. Nevertheless, the amount of money that these people get is exceeded, in my opinion, there are works, like being a doctor, that deserve much more to charge that quantity. To sum up, I think famous sports people should be paid more less than what they charge actually.

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normalize
 that most of the football, tennis, soccer. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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players
are paid
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 speaking, this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
. It is true that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 athletes bring us This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much entertainment and, at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 point, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 us forget about our problems. At the same time, we can not forget that most of them, have worked really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to be where they are and the salary that they gain can be like a reward for that. Nevertheless
, the amount of money that these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
is exceeded
, in my opinion, there are works, like being a doctor, that deserve much more to charge that quantity. To sum up, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 sports This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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Use only "less" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.less
more less
 than what they charge actually. 