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The advantages of public transportation

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Nowadays, governments are trying to encourage people to use buses or subways for their daily travel. What are the advantages of these forms of public transport like these? In recent times, public transportations are encouraged residents to use by government for daily travel. Major benefit of using public transport is that it reduces the number of vehicles on roads and thus slows down global warming. The merits of public transport will be discussed in this essay. One of the important benefits of using public transport is reducing air pollution. When we use less private car and use more public transport, will helps to reduce air pollution and to improve air quality. In addition, some means of public transport such as high-speed trains, trains and hybrid buses cause zero pollution because they run on electricity. Furthermore, there will less heavy traffic jam because people use more public transportation. Another advantage is that people can be more productive while taking public transportation. When you are driving, you have to focus on the road ahead of you. But if you take public transportation, you can finish an assignment, read a book or let your mind wander. Besides, public transportation is giving you plenty of quality time to people watch, as well as get to know your "neighbors. " In conclusion, public transportations allow you to relax, read, take a nap or meet new people and ease congestion, reduce emissions. It also helps to have better life quality because of using more public transport saves non-renewable energy therefore saves your budget and improves air quality thus saves your health.
Nowadays,
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governments
are trying to encourage
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use
buses or subways for their daily travel. What are the advantages of these forms of
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transport
like these?

In recent times,
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public
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transportations
are encouraged
residents to
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use
by
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government
for daily travel. Major benefit of using
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public
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is that it
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reduces
the number of vehicles on roads and
thus
slows down global warming. The merits of
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will
be discussed
in this essay.

One of the
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benefits of using
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is reducing
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air
pollution. When we
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use
less private car and
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use
more
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, will
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to
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reduce
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pollution and to
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improve
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In addition
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means of
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such as high-speed trains, trains and hybrid buses cause zero pollution
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because
they run on electricity.
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, there will less heavy traffic jam
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transportation.

Another advantage is that
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can be more productive while taking
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. When you are driving, you
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have to
focus on the road ahead of you.
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if you take
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, you can finish an assignment, read a book or
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let
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Besides
,
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is giving you
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plenty
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time to
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In conclusion
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allow
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meet
new
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and
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ease
congestion,
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reduce
emissions. It
also
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helps
to have better life
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quality
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because
of using more
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saves non-renewable energy
therefore
saves your budget and
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improves
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air
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quality
thus
saves your health.
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IELTS essay The advantages of public transportation

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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