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the advantages of living in the big city

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There are numerous merits associated with living in metropolis. The principal advantages are the opportunities of education, working and transportation. One of the great advantages of living in a big city is that there are numberless colleges and schools provided for people and this will lead to more opportunities to enroll on the popular universities and schools. Also, urban life has brought some benefits to persons in terms of job, opportunities due to large number of companies, corporations in a large city and people can seek a job in a company with a high salary. Moreover, the comprehensive transport system is plus point of living in metropolitan since buses, taxis and public services are ever close at hand. At the end, these are a just few of the positive aspects of living in a land filled with never-ending possibilities that you will benefit from them.
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in metropolis. The principal advantages are the opportunities of education, working and transportation.

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in a
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city is that there are numberless colleges and schools provided for
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and this will lead to more opportunities to enroll on the popular universities and schools.
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benefits to persons in terms of job, opportunities due to large number of
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, corporations in a large city and
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can seek a job in a
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with a high salary.
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in metropolitan since buses, taxis and public services are ever close at hand.

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, these are a
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few of the
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aspects of
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in a land filled with never-ending possibilities that you will benefit from them.
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IELTS essay the advantages of living in the big city

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
145 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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