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The advantage and disadvantage of School Uniforms

The advantage and disadvantage of School Uniforms j9pea

There are numerous advantage of school uniform. Firstly, we are focus more on lesson because the students do not have to worry so much about their appearance plays a part because everyone wear the same uniform. And we less competition at fashion because everything must be in rules. Secondly, we can save money because decrease cost of clothing and it is not necessary to use brand name products. And we one time purchase. Lastly it polite because it safety and propriety

There are numerous advantage of school uniform. Firstly
, we are focus more on lesson This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the students do not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 worry This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much about their appearance plays a part This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 everyone The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wears", "wore".wearswore
wear
 the same uniform. And we less competition at fashion This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 everything This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
. Secondly
, we can save money This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 decrease cost of clothing and it is not necessary to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 brand name products. And we one time This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
. Lastly
It seems that a verb is missing after "it". Please verify.it isit was
it
 polite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it Did you mean "safeties"?safeties
safety
 and Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphpropriety.propriety!propriety?propriety:propriety,propriety;
propriety