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Write about a recent argument you had with your friend. What was the argument about? How did you resolve it?

Write about a recent argument you had with your friend. What was the argument about? How did you resolve it? 6lDB3
Last few days ago, I had an disagreement with one of my friends from neighborhood. The argument was about the point of view on what national unity goverment was doing. The main thing we argued is the progress of revolution. I suggested that since there are many brutal abduction and killings at nights on everyday, the people government should move on in a fast pace to get back in the track of democracy transition. Meanwhile, thoughts of my friend were that people government is currently doing their best to attain what we needed but we have to be paitent. Finally, we closed the argument with an agreement of doing our best and contribute at the most whichever we can for our future.
Last few days ago, I had
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an
disagreement with one of my friends from neighborhood. The argument was about the point of view on what national unity
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goverment
was doing. The main thing we argued is the progress of revolution. I suggested that since there are
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many
brutal abduction and killings at nights on
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everyday
, the
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people
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government
should
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move
on in a
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fast
pace to
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get
back in the
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track
of democracy transition. Meanwhile, thoughts of my friend were that
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people
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government
is
currently
doing their best to attain what we needed
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but
we
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have to
be
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paitent
.
Finally
, we closed the argument with an agreement of doing our best and contribute at the most whichever we can for our future.
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IELTS essay Write about a recent argument you had with your friend. What was the argument about? How did you resolve it?

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