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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement that young people today are less dependent on their parents than in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ideas.

that young people today are less dependent on their parents than in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ideas. 56k7V
Parents continue to be a constant source of support for their children, no matter what age. Technology and changing society however has changed the dynamic of society. Social trends indicate that today’s youth are more independent from their parents than previous generation Due to the development the society, young tend to be more independent than ever before. On one hand, the rapidly advancing technologies provide wider ranges of sources for students to go seek for answers after class instead of asking their parents for help. For example, when a student wants to do an academic research, . . .
Parents continue to be a constant source of support for their children, no matter what age. Technology and changing society
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independent from
their parents than previous
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IELTS essay that young people today are less dependent on their parents than in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ideas.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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