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Do you agree or disagree that with the following statement: A leader should admit if he made a bad decision. Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.

: A leader should admit if he made a bad decision. Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea. yXLnP
Everybody admires a leader, but being a leader is difficult. People depend on a leader to see the bigger picture and make the best decision. Sometimes, the leader can may a bad decision or some serious mistakes. Under such circumstances, should a leader admit to making a poor choice? I think they should. First of all, it is one of the fundamental qualities of leaders to be honest. A gesture of honesty shows people who are following you that you are trustworthy. Though admitting mistakes may cause the leader some trouble, it is always better to admit himself rather than to be revealed by oth. . .
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serious mistakes. Under such circumstances, should a
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to be honest. A gesture of honesty
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trouble, it is always better to admit himself
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IELTS essay : A leader should admit if he made a bad decision. Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
107 words
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