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Do you agree or disagree that in next 20 years there will be fewer cars on the road?

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Automobiles are considered as the heartbeat of the economy. People use car to go to all the places whether it be office, school or recreational purpose. Consequently the number of cars running on the roads is increasing day by day and scenario is getting difficult in terms of space on the street and also for getting parking lot. Although, many people will support that considering the demand and supply of cars there will be increase in number of cars but, I believe that in next twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. To begin, more cars on the streets mean more ga. . .
Automobiles
are considered
as the heartbeat of the economy.
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to go to all the places whether it be office, school or recreational purpose.
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the number of
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running on the roads is increasing day by day and scenario is getting difficult in terms of space on the street and
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for getting parking lot. Although,
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will support that considering the demand and supply of
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there will be increase in number of
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twenty years, there will be fewer
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in
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than there are
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, more
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on the streets mean more
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IELTS essay that in next 20 years there will be fewer cars on the road?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
110 words
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5.0
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