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Oil conservation: An important issue

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Oil has been referred to as engine of the developing country. It is an immense requisite in present era considering its diverse uses. Yesterday I was reading an article in the context of oil in The New York Times. According to a recent survey published in if we keep extracting oil from the natural resources with current rate and don't draw a line in its use and misuse, the day is not too far when the whole world will run out of its oil supply. Natural resource conservation is one of the hot issues in current circumstances. There are several reasons due to which oil is being extracted more than. . .
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developing country
. It is an immense requisite in present era considering its diverse
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uses
. Yesterday I was reading an article in the context of
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oil
in The New York Times. According to a recent survey published in if we
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keep
extracting
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oil
from the natural resources with
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current
rate and don't draw a line in its
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use
and misuse, the day is not too far when the whole world will run out of its
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oil
supply. Natural resource conservation is one of the hot issues in
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circumstances. There are several reasons due to which
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oil
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IELTS essay Oil conservation: An important issue

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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