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That government should spend money on public transport such as buses and train other people think that there should more investment on roads discuss both views and give your opinion

That government should spend money on public transport such as buses and train other people think that there should more investment on roads discuss both views and give your opinion XE8dP
Public transport: people think daily government should to spend the money on buses. People think public transport is crucia in our life. (For instance) people will go to market but market is not close and people will travel in bus and some people daily use bus. Bus does not waste my time. Government should spend the money on public transport. Rode investment: people think to government spent the money on roads because road is very important in our life. People think we shall go to every village travel in bus on the roads. Roads is very Vital. People think adminstration should spend the money on road. My conclusion: rode is very paramamt in our life. Government should spend the money on road because bus travel on the road. Road would ok and my would not waste time. Please state it should spend the money on roads.
Public transport:
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people
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think
daily
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government
should to
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spend
the
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money
on buses.
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People
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think
public transport is
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crucia
in our life. (
For instance
)
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people
will go to market
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but
market is not close and
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people
will travel in bus and
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some
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people
daily
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use
bus. Bus does not waste my time.
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Government
should
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spend
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
on public transport. Rode investment:
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
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think
to
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government
spent the
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money
on
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roads
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because
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road
is
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very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
in our life.
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People
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think
we shall go to every village travel in bus on the
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roads
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Roads
You should probably use: "are" or "were".
is
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very
Vital.
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People
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think
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adminstration
should
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spend
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
. My conclusion: rode is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
Possible spelling mistake found.
paramamt
in our life.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Government
should
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spend
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
bus travel on the
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road
.
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Road
would ok and my would not waste time.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
state it should
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spend
the
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money
on
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roads
.
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IELTS essay That government should spend money on public transport such as buses and train other people think that there should more investment on roads discuss both views and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
146 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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