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Thank to World Wide Wed, now, we easily gain information and connect each other over the world and regularly.

Thank to World Wide Wed, now, we easily gain information and connect each other over the world and regularly. NV8DN
Thank to World Wide Wed, now, we easily gain information and connect each other over the world and regularly. However, people believe that it is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. In my view, this issiue have 2 sides of coin, there are some benefits and drawback what we need to consider. There is the face that the media bring to people convinent and interesting life. Firstly, the social media take people get the news quickly. For example, I can stay at home and use smartphone, and yet I still know what happen in the other side of earth; we do not wait to morning, go to street or bookshop to buy newspaper because we have social media. Besides, human can broaden their horizon without go anywhere. For instance, in the pandemic time, we have been locked down individual in our home, but we can learn on Internet; or what we watching everyday, we can get much of knowledge from their. Furthermore, there are many gameshows, chanels which make we feel relax and fun after long day in media. On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to living in a media rich society. Nowadays, we have been faced to a lot of fake news. This problem is very dangerous, the Western media say, because the articles, a lot of people have wrong information about Covid-19 pandemic, which lead to terrible consequence. What’s more, we have a mount of information and news which very harmful anf toxic and there are not siutable for everyone, especially young people. A name one is Blue Wale, which is a sort video, can ease to see in Youtube, what teach children how to suicide. Therefore, this video has threatened people for a long time. In conclusion, althougt we have some drawbacks, the benefits of media rich society are very desirable. And the most importance is that we should fine the smart and true method which will help us avoid the disadvantaged effects of this.
Thank to
World Wide
Wed,
now
, we
easily
gain information and connect each other over the world and
regularly
.
However
,
people
believe that it is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the
media
on our
lives
. In my view, this
issiue
have 2 sides of coin, there are
some
benefits and drawback what we need to consider.

There is the face that the
media
bring to
people
convinent
and interesting life.
Firstly
, the social
media
take
people
get
the news
quickly
.
For example
, I can stay at home and
use
smartphone, and
yet
I
still
know what happen in the other side of earth; we do not wait to morning, go to street or bookshop to
buy
newspaper
because
we have social
media
.
Besides
, human can broaden their horizon without go anywhere.
For instance
, in the pandemic time, we have
been locked
down individual in our home,
but
we can learn on Internet; or what
we watching
everyday
, we can
get
much of knowledge from their.
Furthermore
, there are
many
gameshows
,
chanels
which
make
we feel relax and fun after long day in media.

On the other hand
, there are
some
disadvantages to living in a
media
rich society. Nowadays, we have
been faced
to
a lot of
fake news. This problem is
very
dangerous
, the Western
media
say,
because
the articles,
a lot of
people
have
wrong
information about Covid-19 pandemic, which lead to terrible consequence. What’s more, we have a mount of information and news which
very
harmful
anf
toxic and there are not
siutable
for everyone,
especially
young
people
.

A name one is Blue Wale, which is a sort video, can
ease
to
see
in
Youtube
, what teach children how to suicide.
Therefore
, this video has threatened
people
for a long time.

In conclusion
,
althougt
we have
some
drawbacks, the benefits of
media
rich society are
very
desirable. And the most importance is that we should fine the smart and true method which will
help
us avoid the disadvantaged effects of this.
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IELTS essay Thank to World Wide Wed, now, we easily gain information and connect each other over the world and regularly.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
339 words
6.0
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