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Tet is a big and important festival in Vietnam

Tet is a big and important festival in Vietnam 5a10D
Tet is a big and important festival in Vietnam. This festival is celebrated by VietNamese people every year. It has the date falling in late January or early February according to the Lunar Calendar. At that time, all members of the family tidy everything and repair their House like putting on new clothes for their home to welcome the new year. Vietnamese spend time shopping from food to clothing to decorations for the house. Moreover, they usually go to church or pagodas to pray for their family having good health and a lucky year. Especially, I really like receiving lucky money during Tet holiday most. Children receive a red envelope containing money from their elders after give their elder traditional greeting.
Tet is a
big
and
important
festival in Vietnam. This festival
is celebrated
by
VietNamese
people
every year. It has the date falling in late January or early February according to the Lunar Calendar. At that time, all members of the family tidy everything and repair their
House
like putting on new clothes for their home to welcome the new year. Vietnamese spend time shopping from food to clothing to decorations for the
house
.
Moreover
, they
usually
go to church or pagodas to pray for their family having
good
health and a lucky year.
Especially
, I
really
like receiving lucky money during Tet holiday most. Children receive a red envelope containing money from their elders after give their elder traditional greeting.
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IELTS essay Tet is a big and important festival in Vietnam

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