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General idea We are all aware that since Covid-19 spreads out all over the world, many things have changed, especially the way we do business. Where in past people prefer to conduct business in person as it ensure the delivery of our intentions, now we are no longer able to do so as freely as we used to live before. Because of this pandemic, many companies have to let their employees to start working from wherever they are, including from home. Advantage Explanation + supporting ideas The world we live today has evolved significantly, specifically in technological aspect. The computer, internet, and even smart phones are now more reliable than ever so that we can use it to communicate to each other as if they are really in front of us. In other words, it is not something impossible to be done. This new protocol could be really beneficial for some workers who have to leave their family for long period of time, as now they can spend more time with their wife, children, and relatives. Besides that, working from home may also be great for your stress because you are working in your comfort zone. Disadvantage Explanation + supporting ideas However, some people may not be comfortable working from home as they might encounter so many potential distractions. Firstly, your discipline tends to be affected since when you are home, you do not bother to act professionally because your supervisors are not watching you all the time. Secondly, your family members could also think that you can be somehow available to talk to all the time, which caused you loosing your focus while working. Conclusion However, definitely not all kind of works could be done remotely from home. Even if it possible, not only positive aspect will you get, but also the negative one.
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we are no longer able to do
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The world we
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has evolved
significantly
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specifically
in technological aspect. The computer, internet, and even smart phones are
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now
more reliable than ever
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so
that we can
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use
it to communicate to each other as if they are
really
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really
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workers who
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have to
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leave
their family for long period of time, as
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now
they can spend more time with their wife, children, and relatives.
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from home may
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potential distractions.
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, your discipline tends to be
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affected
since when you are home, you do not bother to act
professionally
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because
your supervisors are not watching you all the time.

Secondly
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also
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that you can be somehow available to talk to all the time, which caused you loosing your focus while working.

Conclusion

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from home. Even if it possible, not
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Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
305 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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