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Tell us about your ideal area, house or flat and what would make it a perfect place for you to live.

Tell us about your ideal area, house or flat and what would make it a perfect place for you to live. nxj3E
The ideal place to live is a place where everyone has been dreaming about it. It must be safe, comfortable, and satisfies their purposes for members of the family. Whereas, living places have many different categories, such as houses, flats, condos, which depended on personal lifestyle. My lifestyle would be like, prefer to stay far from people, surrounded by nature, I love to do play with children. A house will be the most suitable for this, you can be built on anywhere as you wanted, furthermore, it can add more space as much as you want for kids activities. Although a house seems flexible and responds to your lifestyle quite well, all those things come with a price, which is so expensive than you can imagine. Besides, if you want to move to settle down among nature, the prices may break the ceiling, and you can't afford it any time soon. The ideal house regards as everyone's dream house, it can be built anywhere, customized as you want a house to be. But the prices for the house are too high. This ideal house must be still in your dream.
The ideal place to
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live
is a place where everyone has been dreaming about it. It
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must
be safe, comfortable, and satisfies their purposes for members of the family. Whereas, living places have
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many
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different
categories, such as
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houses
, flats, condos, which depended on personal lifestyle.

My lifestyle would be like, prefer to stay far from
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people
, surrounded by nature, I
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love
to do play with children. A
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house
will be the most suitable for this, you can
be built
on anywhere as you wanted,
furthermore
, it can
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add
more space as much as you want for kids activities.

Although a
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house
seems flexible and responds to your lifestyle quite well, all those things
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come
with a price, which is
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so
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expensive
than you can imagine.
Besides
, if you want to
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move
to settle down among nature, the prices may break the ceiling, and you can't afford it any time
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soon
.

The ideal
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house
regards as everyone's dream
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house
, it can
be built
anywhere, customized as you want a
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house
to be.
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But
the prices for the
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house
are too high. This ideal
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house
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must
be
still
in your dream.
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IELTS essay Tell us about your ideal area, house or flat and what would make it a perfect place for you to live.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
190 words
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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