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New Language how can help yourselves

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New language can be change your mind. Because you learn a new world. People can just think ‘I should a new language for my job. No. You should learn yourself. Because you are live in a city or small town you are just it how you are living. If you learn a new language when your meet new people this could be best thing to do yourself? Clearly, people should learn a new language. They are learning a new person, new area, new world. But this can be so far way
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for my job. No. You should
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IELTS essay New Language how can help yourselves

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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