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English Department Announcement

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The university has announced to offer a new night class called survey of English Literature next semester. The woman shares the view that is a excellent idea to offer a new night class. She gives two reasons for holding her opinions. First, she points that there are more and more working students coming to this university. What she means is that expect more part-time students on campus. Second, she mentions that for those whose major isn't literature. For instance, they don't have a lot of choices if they want to take a literature class. It is a survey class so it is not too advanced
The university has announced to offer a new night
class
called survey of English Literature
next
semester.

The woman shares the view
that is
a
excellent
idea
to offer a new night
class
. She gives two reasons for holding her opinions.

First
, she points that there are more and more working students coming to this university. What she means is that
expect
more part-time students on campus.

Second, she mentions that for those whose major isn't literature.
For instance
, they don't have
a lot of
choices if they want to take a literature
class
. It is a survey
class
so
it is not too
advanced
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IELTS essay English Department Announcement

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
104 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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