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Tell me about your hometown?

Tell me about your hometown? K3BoR

In a words of William Shakespeare "people usually are the happiest at home" My hometown is very big it is situated in Northern part of India it is Karnal in Haryana. It is very beautiful place. my village is an epitome of love peace compassion and affection. It rejuvenate my mind body and soul. In my village I fell the pristine Environment and the people of my village are highly hospitable and friendly. They always behave in a diligent manner actually as I know they are too much innocent. The life of a villagers is much more easier as compared to the city life. My hometown is also known as for its agriculture. Manohar Lal Khattar is currently Chief minister of Haryana Karnal is famous for its rich culture and Tradition. Noor mahal is considered as the rich tradition royal essence and modal amenities Karan lake is most attractive place for tourism Karnal was ranked 24th among 4000+ cities in the list of cleanest city of India Karnal railway station was constructed in1892 AD by the Britishers. Cantonment church tower was constructed in 1806 AD by the Britisher. Kalpana Chawla first Indo American women astronaut she is also from Karnal district of Haryana. Navdeep Saini Indian cricketer he is also from Karnal. Anish Bhanwala olympic medalist in pistol shooter he is from karnal. I belong to Karnal and I really proud to be an Indian. Karnal was selected as one of the hundred Indian cities to be developed as a smart city.

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Karnal
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beautiful
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my
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in a diligent manner
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more easier
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as
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Manohar
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Lal
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Khattar
 is currently
 Chief minister of Haryana

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Karnal
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 for its rich culture and Tradition.

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mahal
is considered
 as the rich tradition royal essence and modal amenities

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Karan
 lake is Did you mean "the most"?the most
most
 attractive place for tourism

Possible spelling mistake found.Carnal
Karnal
was ranked
 24th among 4000+ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 in the list of A determiner is probably missing here: "the cleanest".the cleanest
cleanest
 city of India

Possible spelling mistake found.Carnal
Karnal
 railway station was constructed
 in1892 AD by the Britishers.

Cantonment church tower was constructed
 in 1806 AD by the Britisher.

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Kalpana
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Chawla
first
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Indo
 American women astronaut she is also
 from Possible spelling mistake found.Carnal
Karnal
 district of Haryana. Possible spelling mistake found.NaveenSandeep
Navdeep
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Saini
 Indian cricketer he is also
 from Possible spelling mistake found.Carnal
Karnal
.

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Anish
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Bhanwala
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olympic
 medalist in pistol shooter he is from Possible spelling mistake found.carnal
karnal
.

I belong to Possible spelling mistake found.Carnal
Karnal
 and I really
 proud to be an Indian. Possible spelling mistake found.Carnal
Karnal
was selected
 as one of the hundred Indian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 to be developed
 as a smart city. 