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Tell me about the person you love the most

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The person I am closet to in my family is definitely my mum Thanh. She has a oval face and slim figure body. So, She looks younger than her age. She is the best mom because she always cook the best good and things for her children. As for my mother: love is never cover up. She always stands by my side supporting to me both physically and mentally. I consider her as a reliable friend, ready to listen to my stories. Moreover, She's also a strict teacher everytime I make a mistake. She brings me up valuable morals. My mother is so good fun and open-minded. I take after her in that. I look up to her because she's always hard-working and she works efficiently. When I grow up, I less confess with my mum. I know, She is over-sensitive, this disturbs her thoughts. So, I always try not to make her sad and spend more time with my mother. Now, I want to do my best so that in the future I cam support my mother, my family both physically and mentally like my mother does.
The person I am closet to in my family is definitely my mum Thanh. She has
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and things for her children. As for my
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up. She always stands by my side supporting to me both
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and mentally. I consider her as a reliable friend, ready to listen to my stories.
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a mistake. She brings me up valuable morals. My
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fun and open-minded. I take after her in that. I look up to her
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hard-working and
she works
efficiently
. When I grow up, I less confess with my mum. I know, She is over-sensitive, this disturbs her thoughts.
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So
, I always try not to
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her sad and spend more time with my
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.
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, I want to do my best
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that in the future I
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IELTS essay Tell me about the person you love the most

Essay
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188 words
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