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IELTS essay Is boosted a number of great extent basically in this modern era there are a plethora of films are available which are considered as a source of entertainment actually it is argued that movies related to violence bring a lot of crisis for society I will come various issues as well as some ideas to become a true in the upcoming paragraph on the inside penis in movie supports the detrimental impact on society fast it is considered that with the presence of these varieties of things in the picture

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96 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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