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public libraries are a waste of public money

public libraries are a waste of public money 5b2Be
Libraries play an important part in every individual’s life who are interested in reading. In this modern era, there are many people who believes that public libraries are just a wastage of public money by the time of computer’s introduction as computers can take place of all the tasks of libraries. I am totally agreed with this viewpoint. I am going to discuss the reasons behind my view with the help of a supporting example.
Libraries play an
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a wastage of public money by the time of computer’s introduction as computers can take place of all the tasks of libraries. I am
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IELTS essay public libraries are a waste of public money

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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